Title: Risaldi
Format: Feature
Page Count: 122 (not including the title page)
Genre: Crime/Grief Thriller
Logline: When a crime family brutally murders his wife and children, a Catholic father's quest for vengeance threatens to make him the very monster he's hunting.
Feedback Concerns:
This is my first screenplay in feature form, so if there are things not formatted correctly, please let me know.
Concerned if the inciting incident is too polarizing (I try to avoid it, but it still may be too much)
There's a bit of an Act 2 drag after the midpoint if you get that far
The goal for writing this is to only show the reactions to the violence. I don't want this to be a gory or bloody script. If there were better ways to do that than what I wrote, please let me know.
Thanks for reading this if you read past the first page!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HAd07l2X3-hA2xokmgy3seZHZkJhb5Ma/view?usp=sharing