u/MystiPup

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I took your advice and reworked my Etsy shop. Would love another honest look.

Hey everyone,

I posted here recently asking for feedback on my Etsy shop and got some very honest responses. I took the advice and made a bunch of changes. I rewrote my descriptions to sound more natural, improved my titles, added color charts, disclosed my production partner, and tried to make the shop feel more cohesive overall.

I know it’s still not perfect, but I’d really appreciate another honest look. Does it feel more trustworthy now? Anything that still stands out as a problem?

Shop link:
https://www.etsy.com/shop/MystiPupCreations

Thanks again to everyone who took the time to help last time.

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u/MystiPup — 8 hours ago