This is what I have. But annoyingly it dosent fully make sense
"A woman wakes up cold. The ship pulled her out of cryo early. No alarms, no damage, no explanation she can find — just a transmission on a frequency that should be completely dead.
A fuzzy low quality audionote of a voice. Looping
"Turn."
She logs it. Reports it to mission control. Leaves the channel open and gets on with trying to get back asleep.
The cryo pod doesn't work anymore for some reason. She gets really mad but calms herself down
so she then tries to find the origin of this message
She overlays the transmission data. To where it came from to find the direction.
The transmission is coming from ahead of her. In the direction she's heading
After time. Then it changes
"Turn back now."
She is given a little of time to process but right as she goes to try to turn the ship
She crosses the threshold. And reality starts to warp.
She can't even turn the ship now. So she sends the same turn back
Then the transmission changes one final time.
"I'm sorry."
Her future self. Somewhere ahead of her in space, past the point of no return, saying the only thing left to say. Not a warning. Just "I'm sorry". Repeated forever into the past for her past self to wake up to and be frightened by and spend days unravelling and understand.
She sits with it for a long time.
Then she thinks about why an apology . And she then understands that it's the best she can do
She sets her console to broadcast on the same dead frequency. Back the way she came. Sets it to loop. Makes sure it will keep transmitting after she is gone.
She presses record.
The camera holds on her face. She looks like someone who recognises herself completely and is not surprised by what she sees. She opens her mouth.
Cut to black.
The credits roll in silence.
Then, underneath them, barely there at first — a transmission.
"I'm sorry."
"I'm sorry."
"I'm sorry."
It keeps playing long after the credits end."
For me what doesn't work is the fact I cannot find a reason for her to send the turn back message and for it too fit into the story. And if she does. Why does she then records the sorry at the end. I need her to have a reason to send it for it to end with her recording the I'm sorry after already hearing it.
Also those 2 messages could be one real message but broken up by the transmission being faulty. But "turn back now, I'm sorry" doesn't fully make sense to me of why she's send that. Maybe it needs a completely different message idk. If you think so please share
A few things are missing to make it all make sense but the main idea is there
PLEASE HELP!!! 🙏