Crit: [1877] The Fall
Link to story: A Midnight Refrain
This is flash fiction that I am planning on submitting for something that has a limit of 600 words. Need some eyes on it to clean it up further.
Questions: How is the pacing? Does the premise work? Is it compelling to read, regardless of any possible themes?
Edit: reworded question 3
u/Lucky-Housing-1189 — 10 days ago