u/Lower_Reserve8560

I'm currently working on a Superman game script hopeing to evantually develope it into and actual game. But before I get to far into writing it I wanted to get some proof reading from other people and hear your thoughts. Mainly just looking for story advice but gameplay advice would also help. I understand that some of this probobly sucks please don't hold back I really want to make this the best it can be. Also not just advice but also ideas of what to add would be good too! I would also prefer feedback from people who are familier with the Superman character but any feedback is good!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11ZhdO-mJo260WaGCNYX8RGwBdxuGUvRq8ry1243uzRM/edit?tab=t.0