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Image 1 — I'm writing a story for fun, but would still like some critiques! [Dark Fantasy, 2318 words]
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I'm writing a story for fun, but would still like some critiques! [Dark Fantasy, 2318 words]

TAKE NOTE: Please pay attention to the page number at the footer! I did my best to get reddit on mobile to just export my images correctly, but this was the best I could do.

Hello! For years I have been writing stories on and off, since I always enjoyed reading and writing as a kid, and I also enjoy playing video games like Devil May Cry and NieR, so I decided to use those, along with some literature I have read, to use as inspirations for this fun project of mine.

I already have the completed story outline and already started writing chapter 9 too, but would love to see if people would be interested to read my story.

If you will read the first chapter and say, "Oh, it's going to be a half-demon guy magically becoming good," I swear it's (hopefully to readers) deeper than that.

u/LowStrapGuitar — 1 day ago