u/Lordofoaks

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Just wrote this, critique welcome, not a native speaker :)

To bid farewell

There,

a faint memory brushing gently over my shoulders

lovingly reminding me of a sweeter time and place.

I was comfortably overcome by a strong feeling of longing

Longing for something once known and loved

Long gone, lost forever and sealed for the remainder of the eternity one calls existence.

And yet there it is, not so much as hope but like a soft wind flowing through and waking my tired bones for a brief moment.

A Calling

And

a caressing touch

Not unlike a dream i hung onto so dearly that it carved itseld into flesh and marrow.

With The wonnders of my mind now already fading again into the great paleness, i bid my farewell to what never was.

So Long, what was never meant.

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