u/Kuroi-Yane

The beginning of an Idea

I am a young beginner author passionate about manga. I am just starting to create my own universe and develop my stories.

Today, I am sharing my short synopsis to get feedback, criticism, and improve my project.

Every piece of feedback matters to me on this journey ✍️🔥

Thank you to everyone who takes the time to read it!

Bullied and rejected by everyone at his school, Ark Kurosawa lives a miserable life until the day a truck accident brings his life to an end.

Summoned to another world, Ark hopes to finally get a second chance… but the goddess in charge of reincarnation considers him too weak and useless.

Without hesitation, she condemns him to the Abyss — a place from which no one survives.

As his body falls into the endless depths, time suddenly freezes.

A dark aura appears before him.

A forgotten god… banished by the other gods.

He offers Ark a deal: survive in the Abyss for 1000 years in exchange for one of the seven deadly sins — Greed.

But before granting him this power, the god asks him a single question:

“..........”

Ark accepts.

And when time begins to flow again… his true descent into darkness begins.

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