u/Khaos_King20

(I hope I'm using the correct flair)

I am writing a brief description of the system I am working on:

Psionics is the set of practices concerned with the study and application of the psi factor, a natural phenomenon through which specific patterns of structured neural activity, mediated by technological interfaces, can influence external physical systems.

Psychokinesis, from the Greek ψυχή ("soul") and κίνησις ("movement"), refers to the ability to affect a physical system without direct physical interaction through the psi factor. It constitutes the fundamental mechanism underlying all psionic applications.

Among these applications are:

1. Elementalism

Elementalism is a psionic discipline that operates through the use of an external biological-based interface known as an elemental core. This interface links the user's neuronal activity to an elemental core, allowing them to manipulate matter and energy associated with "natural elements" as if they were an extension of their own body. These elements include water, fire, earth, wind, lightning, etc., within a range dependent on the senses.

The elemental cores are not universally compatible. In incompatible subjects, the nucleus exhibits parasitic behavior, progressively overriding the host's physiology and causing systemic failure with continued use.

The problem is that I feel (and have been told) that the system seems disconnected. What I'm looking for is advice, mostly empirical, on how to improve cohesion and connection between the system elements.