u/Key-Marionberry7731

Good day all! I've been writing (for fun, leisure, and hobby) for the longest time, and I would like some feedback to better improve myself.

Here is the 1st chapter -

https://threadsoffatetales.wordpress.com/2025/08/11/mist-over-pinghai-bridge/

Do note that the world is set in fantasy Ancient China, so non Chinese folks here might be unfamiliar with the pronunciations of the names of my characters. The genre would be 仙侠, 玄幻 and BL 😃