AI hate and ambience issue, any help?
SO every one seems to #hate AI and claims it is because of legality. I am wondering if other people are having this issue? I did actually used AI to edit a few of my works since a real editor cost 800 or so and I can't afford that. What I did was utilize AI to do a full edit of my four novels, then went back through and added texture and poet like ambience as well as increasing the language. I was accused of using AI on the project, so I submitted my first draft to the accuser, who claimed that it was AI. so the last 4 days I have been using an AI detector and have uncovered that I can write at 84% to 100% AI and have to use AI in order to get it down to 0% to 13% which I feel is stupid, I rather like painting the scene so the reader is pulled into every part of what's going on, smells (which are common) light, sound, sight, in order to pass the AI detector I have to edit with AI,
I write this;
I don't descend. I seep. I just sort of pour out from the rafters like a mess of black, syrupy smoke. It’s a thick air that smells like crushed herbs and a heavy, raw musk. I don't fall; I hunt. I'm a living stain drifting on the air, pulled straight toward the heat of his skin. I watch as the first wisp of my scent hits the back of his neck. He shudders with a deep, carnal shake that I feel in my own bones. I am the one who made him shake.
AI editing came up with this;
I don't descend. I seep. I just sort of pour out from the rafters like a mess of black, syrupy smoke. It’s a thick air that smells like crushed herbs and a heavy, raw musk. I don't fall; I hunt. I'm a living stain drifting on the air, pulled straight toward the heat of his skin. I watch as the first wisp of my scent hits the back of his neck. He shudders—a deep, carnal shake that I feel in my own bones. I am the one who made him shake.
This is the AI version to beat the AI positive I had to do this;
I don't fall. I leak. I just spill down and smell like crushed herbs and raw musk. I'm not falling, I'm hunting. Just a living stain drifting on the air. I'm pulled to the heat of his skin. I watch the first bit of my scent hit his neck. He shudders. It's a deep, nasty shake. I feel it in my own core. I made him do it.
SO if I add a single description, the scent of the air or smoke, color, really any sound, absolutely anything it pops up written by AI, how does one actually write description with out being flagged as AI or sounding stupid?