u/Jolly-Ordinary-6756

Freedom is not just a word; it's an emotion of feeling free from everything. That makes you feel suffocated, whether it's your emotions, habits, addictions, or relationships. Not just physical freedom, I'm talking about mental freedom.

When you're stuck between your brain and heart, that suffocation slowly makes you feel miserable; be mature and take control at that time. Spend time alone, because if you don't feel free with yourself, how can you feel free with someone?

Freedom depends on many aspects, such as your current thoughts, surroundings, and the intricate relationship between letting go and freedom. Letting go of things means removing them from your life and mind.

And in any case, if you have two paths to choose between – feeling freedom and feeling suffocated with sweet pain – please

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u/Jolly-Ordinary-6756 — 8 days ago
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Here’s a small part from Chapter 1:

“It’s 5:00 a.m… I really don’t want to wake up this early,” Ritika thought.

“My parents are so strict. I’m only in class 8—how can I be this punctual?”

“Wake up!” her father called out. “Every student should wake up at 5:00 a.m. Otherwise, they won’t become good students.”

Her mother added, “If you want to be successful, morning studies are the best.”

Ritika lived in a small village, but her thoughts were never limited by it.....please like i really want to write

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u/Jolly-Ordinary-6756 — 8 days ago