About a Note I Received
I got this note about the main love interest in my scriptL
"So far she seems like one big bummer, which is making it hard for me to root for her journey with the main character. I think your best bet right now is to punch her up a bit and bring just a twinge of playfulness to her witty and curt banter. You can keep the inherent cynicism, but also make her feel like a more grounded and even mischievous type. "
Cool, but then, they get into this:
"I can definitely picture people just like her, and they have that comedy factor that makes their often dour commentary feel fresh and less depressing. It'll just add a lot of layers here that I think would really plus up the beginning."
Does that feel like it'd be more in the performance? It's confusing to me.
Any thoughts?