Don't get me wrong, the story was great. It was nice to see Flame care a little and overall I enjoyed it, but two things in particular just made the video feel really off.
Flowtives. I love the guy, but he got done dirty this video. On top of his voice acting not being very good (which is fine, he probably hasn't done much of it), whoever wrote Flow's lines did not do it very well. Flow's part of the script the whole video felt sooo awkward. I genuinely like the guy and feel bad for him, cause he got done so dirty this video. The personality they gave Flow felt very confusing and everytime he spoke, it just felt really awkward and unnatural.
Mistrul vs. Flame. Like genuinely what was this fight. Flame didn't win because he went into the "zone". Flame won simply because Mistrul stopped using his elytra and mace. Like what? I hate it when Unstable just decides to not let a character use a major part of his kit. Like they let Shoebilly absolutely demolish Theo, but they just decided to have Mistrul stop using his mace???? Flame had absolutely no business winning that fight. Mistrul lost purely because he stopped using his elytra and mace. Based on the video, I think he used it once maybe twice in the whole fight. Obviously, Flame's gonna destroy him in melee.
TL:DR: Flow's lines and voice acting felt awkward. Flame's fight vs Mistrul was stupid since Mistrul didn't use his mace or elytra.
Overall, I liked the video because it gave Flame some much needed emotional development outside of just fighting, but these two issues really made the video not as good as it could've been. Please stop nerfing characters by stopping them from using their kit.