u/Internal-Berry3028

More random lore from my world. Would love if you speculated and asked some questions or gave tips or criticism.

Power system

Aether - The fundamental force of all of reality, created by the Monarchs. It is considered to be the building block of all reality. Theoretically, anything is possible via aether, given someone has enough understanding or control over it. Aether can be used to power several advanced structures, when manipulated it can be transmuted into objects or elements. At extreme levels of understanding, higher ranked mystics can manipulate the fundamental laws of reality, including space and time, though this is forbidden unless sanctioned by a Monarch.

Mystic - A mystic is anyone who has been trained to manipulate aether for combative purposes. Mystics are split into seven ranks or stages ascending in power. (Names subject to change) Adept -> Elite -> Regent -> Master-> Avatar -> Calamity -> Myth.

These ranks are based off of a mystics aetheric control and understanding of aether, two factors which are almost always the determining factor to aetheric output and capability.

Nether - Nether is simply aether that has been corrupted by the Abyss. Nether is dangerous in the fact thag any non-abyssal entity that attempts to manipulate it without the correct tools is almost guaranteed to go mad or damn themselves to Hell. For this reason, Nether is forbidden within Aureth. If detected any Vigil member is mandated to kill on sight or worse, direct imperception from a Monarch.

Ki - Life force. All living beings on Aureth have Ki but only humans can manipulate Ki. On the brink of extinction and after a millenia of being enslaved, some humans developed the ability to manipulate Ki, preventing their imminent extinction. Ki isn't as flashy as aether and is separated into Circles or spheres.

Circles/spheres - Humans naturally have 13 spheres around their spiritual bodies. Upon being pushed to the absolute limit, humans can break the thirteenth sphere, unlocking the ability to manipulate ki. Upon the destruction of a sphere, a human will notice an increase in mental and physical performance. Subsequent destruction of spheres results in an increase in life force/ki which causes them to gain several upgrades including; Enhanced physical strength, faster mental processing speeds, increased lifespan, etc.

Again, tips, questions, criticism, speculation, theories, anything, would love to hear thoughts. Questions on what the story could be about? Will post more. Will also eventually show art.

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u/Internal-Berry3028 — 14 days ago

Just need some advice going forward, whether it be to career paths, if there's even a point in going forward, if my life is SUPPOSED to feel so bad rn.

u/Internal-Berry3028 — 14 days ago

Idk how to do this so I'll just start typing ig, it will seem very generic ngl but hold out with me pls?

Futuristic setting

General Overarching areas:

Aureth - The physical realm/universe. Home to several races including Elves, Empyreans, Orcs, Giants, Nutsai, Humans etc. Ruled by the Vigil, a theocratic galactic government that watches over all.

Celestia - Heaven. The celestial realm. A separate dimension that predates Aureth, home of the Monarchs. Resting place of those touched by the Monarchs

Abyss - The bottom. Split into 3 layers. First layer, Mortem, home of reapers and the infamous Kith. Hell, home of the demons and where almost all souls end up after death. The True Abyss, (will probably change this name) a truly endless, bottomless pit filled with horrors that transcend comprehension or maybe it is filled with absolute nothingness, nobody knows for sure.

Races:

Monarchs - Divine, primordial entities that created Aureth and Celestia. Monarchs hold near infinite power and are ruled by an Over-Monarch that rules over them all. They aren't all benevolent, they, much like most other races differ, but they all fall under the Over-Monarch (brainstorming a better name for that dw).

Empyreans - A race of humanoid beings in Aureth that have small traces Monarch DNA inside of their genome. They have radiant, ethereal skin and depending on their specific bloodline, can have anywhere from 3 to 10 eyes. Their beauty is considered unparalleled, even compared to the elves. Naturally, all Empyreans have immense potential for aether manipulation. Natural enemies to their nemesis race, Kith. Upon death, due to their Monarch DNA, they are damned to Celestia, unless being slain by a Kith.

Humans - Humans were enslaved for a millenia by the superior races (races that could manipulate aether) and then exterminated 500 years ago. They are believed to be extinct but have been hiding in a Null Zone, called Nod.

I'll stop there, thoughts? Questions? Tips? Again it seems pretty generic but this isn't everything.

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u/Internal-Berry3028 — 14 days ago

Either im an idiot or some of you are all way too critical. Idk about everyone else but I felt immersed from episode 1. A couple moments did feel a little meh, but that's every show tbh.

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u/Internal-Berry3028 — 15 days ago