u/Ill_Guidance_1808

rarely the wind blows through

they need atmosphere

dare to let it pass?

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waves flutter

it calls, swim along the path

question it?

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rectangular lights rotate against the ceiling

the rhythm does not change

go against the limit?

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pale yellow, outlines the entrance

lies in the other room

get used to it?

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that intention could cut arteries

gallantly decide those options

a finished moment?

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eyelids, have a foot in the door

to open it, would reset everything

endlessly arguing?

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air needs to breathe

pressured to go

exits blocked

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force the curtain up

trembling as the hand moves it

stuck in time, it would be a trip

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let the cloud pour down

shine that light in

let it happen

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