u/I_exist_here_k

I lost it a while ago and I’ve been tryna find it and I *think* it’s called “The Discs and the Underground” but when I try to look for it nothing pops up

for reference, these are the details I remember:

- there was two cities sorta stacked on top of each other, one was underground

- Tommy got these fancy powers from different MC music discs

- there was a performance bit in a stadium (“I want something just like this”)

- I know Aimsey was in it

- Tommy accidentally started a tradition marathon thing when people started joining him on his morning jog

- the vines were a big issue because they started growing in the underground’s tunnels, so on an anniversary marathon they had to reroute the race

I’d like to think the ideas I have for stories are good, but whenever I’m writing I think I rush through the plot

any tips on how to fix pacing without it getting boring, or not too fast thay everything kinda flies by