u/IWantAShortUsername

update 2 of trying to design, thinner lines, is it readable? one word is hidden

update 2 of trying to design, thinner lines, is it readable? one word is hidden

I may start to use this version as a base instead of starting over.

what do you read? what would you improve?

I am a bad artist, just trying to become better, I wouldn't post here bothering you if it were not tengwar. not my idea, I'm just practicing.

forgive me.

u/IWantAShortUsername — 1 day ago

design update, sry for my bad abilities, is it more readable?

there are two words here, what do you think is written?

sorry for whoever is bothered by me, for keeping to try.

you may ignore this version, I think I would work on both parts on the same canvas.

u/IWantAShortUsername — 1 day ago

trying to make a design, probably bad, there is a second hidden word

sorry for it looking like that, im not an artist.

i tried to make a design with two words, with one hidden, what do you read?

u/IWantAShortUsername — 1 day ago

sry for the bad design, just wondered if the hidden word is readable too.

I would probably start over.

u/IWantAShortUsername — 6 days ago