u/HumpbackJesus

I feel like it just sounds like I'm working hard. Not effortless like a bunch of fairies dancing around. Biggest things I notice for myself (besides pulse) are the repeated Es not speaking well, accents are inconsistent, and the notes following trills in the last bit not coming out so much. Also my throat A is super sharp.

Would appreciate some notes on this excerpt! I'm struggling to get the character down in the first section. I like the breath articulation for staccato 8ths but feel like breaking up the air hurts my phrasing/direction. Also my runs at the end are just not even yet :(