u/HumbleDepth9945 — reddlx

Emmanuel was a nobody earlier. He was born in the tribe of ker-baghchar, ravenous nomads which occupied the third land. Third land is the land, neither mountain, nor plains a middle land around the upper reaches(but not the extreme regions, from which the river originates) of river treasure and river sarnai. This land was infamous for being marshy, filled with dense forests. It was also infamous for being dens of tigers.

At that time, gerry arathoon ruled with an iron Fist. Emmanuels tribe were a migrants from cbse. They sacked places,looted towns, hiding in the marshy regions. They were known for taming tigers like mere sheep.

They were forced to live in the marshland of the third land, for in the higher mountains, there lived a dangerous breed of serpents, with purple tales, sharp as spear, capable to wipe off entire nomadic settlements. Down South was the vast plains, where the tribe wouldn't stand a chance against large armies of gerry arathoon.

If y'all want, I'll add changes. Is it good, I'll add more if y'all like it.....

reddit.com

u/HumbleDepth9945 — 4 days ago

▲ 1 r/ICSE

New ship idea??

Look, she's so much worried about pale cheesecake's health.

u/HumbleDepth9945 — 4 days ago

▲ 8 r/ICSE

How to use thou, thee, thy, thine

If you need to write something Shakespearean, here's somewhat help

Thou: used as subject. The verb often is added -st or -est (depending whether verb ends with e) (If it ends with s, just add t)

Eg :Thou knowest the truth

Eg:thou takest the crown

Eg:thou hast done bad

Thee:used as object. No additional cases

Eg:I insult thee.

I praise thee.

Thy: possesive(your) used before consonant

Eg.

Thy car, thy kingdom

Thine : possesive (your) before vowel

Eg. Thine eyes

P. S. I didn't get it earlier also. You will make some mistakes in the starting. It's fine :). Just practice (as per your pace, ofc) you'll get the hang of it

Also for vernacular language (not related), use the dialect closest to the most archaic poems written in and slightly either sanskritize the language, or do it in a slightly rural language (doha like)

Eg hindi, easiest way is to use braj/awadhi(most dohas written in this dialect). You **can** use other dialect, but then do it slightly ruralize the language used. You can do it for all dialect, but braj and awadhi are easiest since

:taught here(tulsidas, surdas, kabirdas)

: used extensively here

U can use other dialects also, but be well versed, and understand in it.

reddit.com

u/HumbleDepth9945 — 6 days ago