u/Haunting_Tiger_312

I'm currently writing an ambitious Game of Thrones and Star Wars crossover—the ultimate project for fans of military strategy, political intrigue, kingdom building, and dark comedy. I’ve already completed five chapters, but I’m ready to elevate the narrative into a true masterpiece.

To achieve that, I’m looking for more than just a beta reader; I need a creative partner who deeply understands the nuances of Westerosi politics and the lore of the Star Wars universe. Most importantly, I need someone who knows how to craft the kind of high-stakes cliffhangers that keep readers coming back for more. An awesome story that is basically the wet dream of Da Boyz!!!

Hey, I’m currently writing a long-form Game of thrones/Star wars fanfic and I’ve hit a point where I could really use some outside input.

What I need help with:

• General beta reading (flow, pacing, readability)
• Consistency checking (character behavior, power scaling, world logic)
• Story direction / brainstorming when I get stuck
• Feedback on political and strategic decisions in the plot

What I already have:

• 2+ chapters written
• Clear long-term direction (rise to power, empire-building, etc.)
• Strong focus on a calculating, in-character Palpatine

What I’m looking for in a beta reader:

• Familiar with either Star Wars or ASOIAF (both is ideal)
• Honest and direct feedback (not just praise)
• Someone interested in involvement (not just one chapter)

If you’re interested, feel free to comment or DM and I can share what I’ve written so far.