First month of manga practice — 5 finished pages so far. Honest feedback needed 🙏
Hey everyone, I’ve been seriously practicing manga page layouts, expressions, and inking this month. I finished 5 pages so far and I’m trying to improve my storytelling and panel flow.
This page is part of my original manga practice, and I would really love honest feedback on:
- panel composition
- anatomy
- shading / blacks
- readability from right to left
I’m still learning and trying to improve every page, so any critique or advice from experienced artists would mean a lot.
Thank you for taking a look 🙏
u/Future_Pineapple9736 — 2 days ago