It’s Just an introduction! - What are your thoughts?
Hi, I made this raw track recorded on my phone.
I’d love feedback on:
the vibe,
vocal flow and delivery,
whether the lyrics feel authentic or too abstract
if the ending verse hits
Please listen till the end — the final section changes a bit stylistically 🙂
Lyrics :-
It's the opening act yaha yaar mere kirdar mere kahani bhi meri par manamani duniya ki chale
It's the opening act yaha awaz meri time mera nikalunga gaane 4 ye to bass shuruwat hai zamane ki
It's the opening act
Aankhe meri video banati chale
Aage sapne dhikati chale
Sapna dhundla gey to kohre mein kaam se side line hotechale . Phir samay pe pabhandi aayi priorties ki listing layi
Jira board bhargya bhai?
Thoda samay leke samay ko balwan banado.
I got that nostalgia time machine par na jau wapasi to save that time
How can i save that time
I got dime for my time
I got mind for my time
And i also got to know that
Aslasya samsaya hai
Galti hogya to kya hai
Aage badhlo picha kya hai
Piche to bass bhoot kal
Abhi chalraha vartman
Abb tu mann na mann par kirdar mere
par janne hai sabi yaha
Mixed emotions ki sabha
Abb araha hai mazza
Bandha hai ye sama
Bandha hai ye sama
Suno bangalore ki ye lore
Roaming around delhi airport
Chod me nikale do bhai the on top
Flight land
Samay jhand
Yerdu milds kodi
Felt vulnirable
Samajh me ne aay
Puri raat bhandi me jay
Whaat the fuck is happening ye kaha aagay mere bhai
Felt vulnerable totally understandble
Music ae loud
Cloudy hai crowd
I am gonna take the shot
I feel like i am shroud
Woke up and i must
Saaf karaha gaano se ab dust
Lagg gai jo mere gaano par ab rust
I am gonna drop the act and make it a bust
Phir karna just adjust i am gonna combust and thrust . Well arent these lyrics just robust . What should i do
Its just an introduction to this new version
Starting the 0.0.1 i am now stubborn