u/Forsaken_Host_1868

Can anyone proofread this?
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Can anyone proofread this?

Heyyyyyy peopleeeee, I'm just making this post to see if anyone can proofread this texting scene or whatever you want to call it of mine. I want to make sure nothing from this texting scene will get me dragged into the mud for anything it says because I genuinely just be saying/typing shit to hear my own voice at this point because I have already looked over this because I was writing this at 12 in the morning, I had to fix some spelling mistakes.

Also, ignore any underlined words in red, because it's on purpose for the most part, but all I really need is someone to proofread this to make sure that there is nothing rude, mean, insensitive, or any spelling mistakes that I missed/overlooked. Thank you to anyone who does proofread this

u/Forsaken_Host_1868 — 9 hours ago
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Guys look at how cute my mini game is looking so farrrr!!!!!

Okay, so I'm not finished yet. I literally haven't even finished making the scene that goes before the mini game, so this is all I have for now! But is this not cute!!! Like, I love it so much, and I can't wait until I finish it and get to see the finished product

Butttttttt, why didn't y'all tell me that making mini games is so stressful? Like, do y'all hate me because I would have loved a heads-up, being like "Btw, making mini games is not for the weak and you shouldn't do it.

Genuinely, I am fighting for my life to make my mini game, and it's one of those timed choices, and it's giving me anxiety when I preview it. Mind you, I haven't even finished ONE of the choices, so that they'll lead to other choices.

Like major props to people who make mini games for fun or have them in their story because what the heck. I don't know how y'all do it because I already want to quit. But I'm not because torture is my new love language

This post is not me asking for advice or suggestions; I just wanted to show y'all what I'm currently working on for my new story that I hope to finish.

u/Forsaken_Host_1868 — 3 days ago

I ate with this scene and you can't tell me otherwise

This is the texting scene I did for my new story called What You Took From Me, because I'm lowkey stressed out about my other story, In Plain Sight but it's because I have a lot of things I want to change and fix about some scenes but if you are waiting for that story I do have plans to finish it I just don't know when yet.

But back to my texting scene, I had plans to have the little text button things turn grey because on iPhones, they turn that grey color when you press a button. I was going to do that, but I'm lowkey lazy and don't want to do it, but I most likely will, but let me know if you think if I did the little thing for when the button turns grey when you press it.

I am not making this post to ask for advice or suggestions; I just wanted to show y'all my texting scene and my literal geniusiness in action. Also, I fixed the text to be on the right side. I don't know why it went on the left

u/Forsaken_Host_1868 — 5 days ago