u/Foriamlord

(Trigger warning: Infidelity) Critique wanted: Please critique the blurb for my romantic tragedy.

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It’s not her fault. Really! Her marriage was doomed from the start. Not because there is anything wrong with him. On the contrary: he’s kind, sensitive, sweet, rich and  handsome. He’s the full package. The problem is he’s her childhood sweetheart and she’s not a child any longer.

Follow Liz as she torpedoes her perfect life after a simple, seemingly innocent decision. Watch the train wreck unfold like a deer mesmerized by two truck lights that grow rapidly, moment by moment, as Liz’s attempts to spice up her sex

life spiral wildly out of control.

Watch as one small glance down the rabbit hole leads her on an adventure more wild than she could possibly have imagined. Wonder at how she never once looks back. But it’s not her fault. Really!

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u/Foriamlord — 6 days ago