u/FootShapedMagnet

I'm an experienced writer, but romance is not my forte. I've been working on an idea and finally got a draft of the first chapter written. I don't have any avid romance fans in my usual circle of readers.

Would someone be interested in taking a look and sharing their thoughts? I'm looking for a critique of the romance aspect and whether or not the first chapter has enough of a hook.

It's only 1200 words...if I need to pivot the genre because it's awful, I don't want to go too much further.