u/Flashy-Tour2106

this is the first thing ive done like this and i would like some feedback on it. its just a rough plan so far but i want some feedback on it. thanks.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SnoxLWVMr1Wr6ZFQmoRBNYSJ6tr1ayGrQFOwsLJiiAA/edit?usp=sharing