u/Fantastic_Ingenuity9

I'm making a little pixel animation story, being the novice that I am I'm eager to learn. Any glaring flaws you see in this? Is the dialogue too fast paced? Is the palette too jarring? Are the sprites too inconsistent at times? Whatever comes to your mind.

I'm pretty happy with this even though it took me much longer than I thought it would. But I'm not shying away from criticism (how else can I improve) so lay em on me.