Tried working on a longer scene this time with clearer stakes and a more active objective instead of just sitting in emotion.
Also adjusted the framing/setup a bit to make the interaction feel more grounded and connected.
Would love to know if the situation and relationship come across more clearly now.
Thank you in advance.
Tried something more active and goal-driven this time instead of sitting in emotion.
Focused on trying to actually move the other person instead of just delivering lines.
Curious if it still feels grounded and believable.
Reworked the same scene after some feedback, adjusted the framing and tried to bring more intention and weight without forcing it.
Really curious how it sounds this time, happy about any helpful comment!
Trying a new self-tape, focusing on staying present and not over-controlling the moment.
Does it feel grounded and natural, or does it come off forced anywhere?
Appreciate every comment!