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The dog is yapping I hear his little manucured claws crying erratically on the floor
In the room slightly off center is a sprawling sculpture
Don’t ask me to describe it for I have never seen more than a glimpse
It will not change I will not move
From its off center space (how annoying it could not be built just and proper)
I have never looked at it
I know it’s pale and ordinary
Eyes burn a white heat and all I see of it is lost in the fire
I think ?
The dog can see
Is trying to tell
I am not deciphered
I am not unveiled
I am at the mercy of the yapping echoing
Am I : the sculpture the dog the crying ?
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u/Exciting_Bread419 — 15 days ago