u/Exciting-Produce4023

She's waiting for me in the attic.

She's been there since I can remember.

A shadow, lingering in wait

For me to make the choice to seek her.

I never do.

When I choose, I choose wrong

And sometimes I can't choose at all.

I fill the day with shiny things that fill the room with light.

Maybe this way the shadow will go away.

But when the light's gone and it's quiet,

I can hear the sand falling and

Her footsteps in the attic.

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u/Exciting-Produce4023 — 7 days ago
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She's waiting for me in the attic,

She's been there since I can remember

A shadow, lingering in wait

For me to make the choice to seek her.

I never do.

When I choose, I choose wrong

And sometimes I can't choose at all.

I fill the day with shiny things that fill the room with light.

Maybe this will cast the shadow away.

But when the light's gone and it's quiet,

I can hear the sand falling and

Her footsteps in the attic.

(I made a small tweak to the original).

/r/poetry_critics/comments/1srokg0/the_attic/
u/Exciting-Produce4023 — 11 days ago
▲ 3 r/justpoetry+1 crossposts

She's waiting for me in the attic.

She's been there since I can remember.

A shadow, lingering in wait

For me to make the choice to seek her.

I never do.

When I choose, I choose wrong

And sometimes I can't choose at all.

I fill the day with shiny things that fill the room with light.

Maybe this way the shadow will go away.

But when the light's gone and it's quiet,

I can hear the sand falling and

Her footsteps in the attic.

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u/Exciting-Produce4023 — 11 days ago