Hey everyone 👋
I recently started a travel vlog channel WANDERWITHAMRENDU where I’m exploring unique stays, hidden places, and cinematic experiences — mixing drone shots + storytelling.
I just uploaded a video about a bamboo villa deep inside a forest (Mahajiva, Bali) 🌿 and tried to make it more immersive rather than just a typical vlog.
Would genuinely love some honest feedback — especially on:
- Hook (first 10–20 seconds)
- Pacing (too slow / engaging enough?)
- Cinematic shots vs storytelling balance
- Thumbnail & title (would you click?)
I’m not looking for subs — just real opinions so I can improve 🙏
Here’s the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xqO24Mx3ic
Feel free to be brutally honest 😅 I’m trying to level up fast.
u/Excellent-File6270 — 10 days ago