i write maybe once a year, and it's always some nonsense. after reading metamorphosis i was inspired to write something brief the other day and i was curious about how it reads. i think i would write more if i wasn't so self conscious about it. i haven't taken an english class since middle school, and i tend to ramble. my grammar and structure is poor, and i don't read too many books worthy of looking up to (excluding metamorphosis) . I'm not the brightest generally, so i worry that what i write only makes sense to me- but im the only one reads it so who cares, right?!
it’s a commentary (?) about how people follow the same formula of: attempt to fix you, take on your burden but it doesn’t help, get upset that you arent getting better, complain that youre hurting them, leave
i suppose i'm just looking for some input on how 1) how understandable this is 2) if there's any substance to it, or if it seems worthy of being read and 3) if there's any grave grammatical/structural errors
i feel incredibly embarrassed posting this but that's alright, i already expect what's to come
also i apologize. content wise, im aware this is quite boring and nothing original. just everyone's shower thoughts regurgitated into a snotty sounding paragraph