Indie Pop, Folk, Alternative: This my first ever song! Working on new stuff now would love genuine feedback/reviews on it. What do you think of it?
Hi Erdnoid here! I wrote this song after waking up at 3AM from a nightmare I couldn't remember all of. It was basically a dream about a mermaid (siren) luring me in with the most beautiful song I had ever heard in my life. All I wanted to do was remember the song she was singing me, but couldn't remember for the life of me. So I just wrote this song pretty much out of frustration about that lost memory. I recorded in my living room in my apartment. I also ended up getting mixed in Dolby Atmos (for anyone who has apple music). I also added Spotify link too. It ended becoming my first song release. I'm currently working on my 2nd song now and would love feedback/reviews on this to make my next song better. Thanks!
Apple Music: https://music.apple.com/us/album/lost-in-a-whisper-single/1894425542
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/track/0wdA58LPM1H8cj0BZ0dM61?si=35c7dee3fa4c4726