u/Equivalent_Tutor3358

Screenplay continued part 2

I have written after slap incident when heer finally comes across the truth of drug fiasco and Nawab finally gave up and gives her divorce papers because he had lost all hope and then we saw a determined heer and next episode opens up after 6 months where heer left brar mansion and returned to her house and nawab at his house

PART-1

https://www.reddit.com/r/TUJulietJattDii/s/0K2uBak2uj

PART 2

SETTING: BRAR MANSION – NAWAB’S ROOM / THE VILLAGE HOUSE

TIME: NIGHT

HEER’S VILLAGE HOUSE

The room is dark. AJIT is rummaging through a trunk, looking for the "Hoodie." He’s sweating, his hands shaking from withdrawal and fear. He finds it—but as he pulls it out, a foot slams onto the fabric.

HEER stands there. She isn't the weeping girl anymore. Her eyes are cold, sharp, and with a new kind of purpose.

AJIT

(Growling)

Move your foot, Heer.

HEER

I have kept your sectet safe for last 6 months but you are not getting me,okay let me inform the police.

She leans down, her face inches from his.

HEER (CONTINUE)

You drugged a boy’s career for a few bottles of scotch. You sold my happiness for Gulaab’s money. I had told you don't leave this room,don't drink,even don't breathe without my permission.

AJIT

(Scared)

You're my daughter... you wouldn't...

HEER

(Grabbing the hoodie)

I was never your daughter & I even stopped caring for you the moment you became a henchman. And above all you hurt my Nawab.An offense which deserves no maafi. And a wife protects her husband from monsters—even if the monster is her own blood.

She turns to her Mother, who is watching from the door.

HEER (CONTINUE)

Ma, if he tries to leave, call the SHO. I’ve already given them a "tip" about a local thief.

Choose him, or choose me.

Heer walks out into the night, the hoodie tucked under her arm like a trophy.

BRAR MANSION – NAWAB’S ROOM

The room is depressed as if mirroring nawab. No posters, NO trophies, No pics,no mess as earlier.

NAWAB is doing push-ups. One-handed. His face is a full of agony, but he doesn't stop. He’s punishing his body so he doesn't have to feel his heart.

A shadow falls over the doorway. It’s GULAAB.

GULAAB

Nawab, beta... enough. You’ve been training for four hours. Come, eat something-

NAWAB

(Without stopping)

I’m busy.

GULAAB

Nawab please stop now!

It's been 6 months,stop punishing yourself for what that village girl called you.

Nawab stops. He stands up, sweat dripping off him, his eyes dark.

NAWAB

The "village girl" was right, Mom. I was a loser. I let you handle my life. I let you choose my shortcuts. But that Nawab died six months ago.

GULAAB

What are you saying? I did everything for your happiness!

NAWAB (with a smirk)

Seriously mom!

Then why am I not happy?

He walks past her, his shoulder cold. He goes to the balcony—the same one where he once dreamt of a future with Heer—and stares into the darkness.

EXTERIOR OF BRAR MANSION – GARDEN – NEXT MORNING

Nawab is shadow-practicing his batting. The gates open. He doesn't look. He assumes it’s a servant. But the footsteps are different. They are firm. Determined.

HEER walks onto the grass. She sits on the bench right next to his cricket kit.

NAWAB

(Stops swinging, doesn't turn)

The security must be getting lazy. I told them no visitors.

HEER

I’m not a visitor, Nawab. This is my home as well

NAWAB

(Turns, eyes burning)

Leave, Heer. I don’t want your here. I don’t want your face in my sight.

HEER

(Calmly)

You can hate the face and push me as much as you want but I'll do what I want.You’re weak. Your timing is off by half a second because your blood sugar is low. You want to make the Indian Team like this? Eh! Eat.

NAWAB

(Steps into her space, towering over her)

You think this is a joke? You think you can slap me, abandon me and then come here everyday and everything would be fine?

HEER

(She stands up, her chest almost touching his)

No. Nothing is fine. I was wrong. I was a fool to not believe you, to not trust you,yes I made a mistake,and I am not denying that.

But I had my reasons Nawab, I tried very hard and you also know that.

Have you forgotten that you left me at the altar after marriage

Have you forgotten you got committed to a girl while married to me.

But still I left everything behind and chose to trust you.

Despite my traumas and fears, I placed my faith in you and you have no idea how hard I tried to keep my side of bargain.

I am not making excuses or trying to shift the blame

Yes I did fail you.

I did betrayed your trust.

I put out relationship in box of questions

I am not denying this.

I couldn't see the truth,I got blinded by proofs over you.

So now, I will be the one who will clean the mess I created.

She reaches out and touches the bruise on his arm from his intense training. Nawab flinches but doesn't pull away.

HEER (CONTINUE)

I’ve dealt with my father. He’s locked in. Now, I’m here to deal with you. You can push me, yell at me, or ignore me. But I’m going to be at every practice. I’m going to be at every meal. I’m going to haunt you until you realize that you’re not a loser and you haven't lost me I am still yours and you’re mine

We belong to each other and together.

NAWAB

(He grabs her wrist, his grip tight, and with  intense eyes)

You’re playing with fire, Heer. I’m not the boy who followed you around like a puppy anymore. I have nothing left to lose.

HEER

Good. Because when you have nothing, you can finally see what’s real.

She pulls her wrist back, and leaves.

HEER (CONTINUE)

I’ll be back at 4 PM at your evening practice to see how much progress you had made.And yes I am moving back.

I lived at my home for past 6 months to give you space but now I am coming back to the place which is rightfully mine.And yes Inform your mother (with an evil smile)

As she walks away, Nawab looks at her retreating figure. His eyes are fixed on her until she disappears, a mix of pure resentment and a love so deep it terrifies him.

. BRAR MANSION – GULAAB’S ROOM

Gulaab is watching from the window, her face contorted with rage. She picks up her phone and dials a number.

GULAAB

Ajit? Why is your daughter at my gates? I thought you handled her!

AJIT (On Phone)

(Voice trembling, muffled)

I can't talk. She... she took the Hoodie. She has the proof. If I move, I go to jail.

Gulaab drops the phone. She looks at the garden. She sees Nawab sitting on the bench, in deep thoughts.She realizes for the first time—she isn't fighting a girl. She’s fighting a woman who has nothing left to fear.

FADE OUT.

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u/Equivalent_Tutor3358 — 2 hours ago

A question

Heer apparently never wore anything as a reminder of her marriage to nawab because she never believed in it,like mangalsutra,sindoor or her engagement ring but now she is continuously wearing the engagement ring of engagement with arjun.

Even Arjun told her to never remove it.

I mean I get it that she was forced to do engagement etc etc like she was forced to get married to Nawab.

But I am sure nobody would force her to always wear the ring on her finger.🤔🤔

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u/Equivalent_Tutor3358 — 7 hours ago