u/Ender_Gamer7433

This is the first page of my second draft of my murder mystery/sci Fi/ realistic fantasy/post-post-apocalypse book

This is the first page of my second draft of my murder mystery/sci Fi/ realistic fantasy/post-post-apocalypse book

What do you think of it as a hook?

Did you get hooked?

u/Ender_Gamer7433 — 4 days ago

Most subs don't even allow the mere mention of the word "AI"

So, I have been using AI recently to see if my scenarios are realistic or not, as iam trying to make my world as realistic as possible

And if the ai doesn't consider it realistif or a scenario survivable, I either alter them Abit or change them entirely

And here are some examples of what happened

In my original idea a character was trapped in a hospital and a girl had to kidnap a nurse and kill her in a bathroom then steal her cloth and get the bomb she got prepared days ago under the floor

Then go to the oxygen cylinders room and get the guard to "check on the body" in the bathroom and then she killed him in the bathroom and stole his identity so she can get into the room and planted the explosives there then ran away and let the hospital turn into a fire ball

After my discussion with ai

I didn't even tell it the plot, I just asked things like how explosive oxygen cylinders

I realized things like oxygen isn't really that explosive that she can make a clean escape with

Hydrogen is explosive enough, but it's usually stored outside hospitals which is a problem to how she would reach there

And also how she is killing probably while she is has a stab wound (that's why she is in the hospital in the first place)

Even before that idea I had an idea Oh I just remembered

Before this idea I had an idea of the character faking death by being injected by a substance that makes her appear dead until she reachs the morgue and someone who is teams with her injects her with a serum that reverse the effects

Kinda like the last scene in the final cool down movie

But genai told me there is no such a serum that exists that's why I abonded the idea

My goal is realism

So after all that I came up with another idea in which she waits for a power outage she planned for, then kills the nurse that delivers her dinner and change clothes with her and cover her body in blankets then makes a clean escape (I brainstormed this idea and ai didn't intervene in the creation of it)

Or go to the hydrogen room and cause an explosion too idk

There was another instant where my character has to jump from a high building on a moving truck that carried a substance that supposed would be water

After discussing thing with ai I realized trucks don't usually let thier container open up let there is no substance that a person can fall on from a 4+ building and stay alive

And the driver shouldn't hear or feel the impact

Not even hay or cotton or pillow or water or any substance i mentioned could logical fulfill the properties I needed according to si

So I had to create a fictional material, and I linked it to one of the main plot points of the story so it just doesn't get creates for the sake of this one scene.

Other thing is that there is a scene where there is an encounter with a police officer, so I brainstormed starting with running away but that didn't work because he could still see the plate and track the car, to stright up killing the cop.

So I discussed with ai things like how cops reaction speed, how cops are trained to react in these situations, if the cop shoot the character where is most likely to hit and many things

But the scenario itself was on me, I just kept altering it until I made the final version the ai told me "this can happen"

There was also a scene where a characters big plan was to launch the unlaunched nuclear weapons on humanity, problem is the ai told Mr nuclear weapons can still be usable after 1000 without maintenance, so I changed the idea to other thing that had similar scale of destruction just not nuclear weapons

And here is the jewel on the crown

My character has supposedly get a mind control ability and when I presented this idea on the ai it told me it was so OP and the readers might question "why can't they just spam" and "this character can only loses when the plot demands it"

So after literally week of think I came up with the idea of making this ability only works on corpses and in very specific conditions and high risk and take a lot of prep time to do

Other than these scenes I just used AI to literally present my plot and glaze me to feed my ego hehe

So, did I taint my work with ai?

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u/Ender_Gamer7433 — 14 days ago

So, I have been using AI recently to see if my scenarios are realistic or not, as iam trying to make my world as realistic as possible

And if it isn't realistic I either alter them Abit or change them entirely

And here are some examples of what happened

In my original idea a character was trapped in a hospital and she had to kidnap a nurse and kill her in a bathroom then steal her cloth and get the bomb she got prepared days ago under the floor

Then go to the oxygen cylinders room and get the guard to "check on the body" in the bathroom and then she killed him in the bathroom and stole his identity so she can get into the room and planted the explosives there then ran away and let the hospital turn into a fire ball

After my discussion with ai

I realized things like oxygen isn't really that explosive that she can make a clean escape with

Hydrogen is explosive enough, but it's usually stored outside hospitals which is a problem to how she would reach there

And also how she is killing probably while she is stabbed (that's why she is in the hospital in the first place)

So after all that I came up with another idea in which she waits for a power outage she planned for, then kills the nurse that delivers her dinner and change clothes with her and cover her body in blankets then makes a clean escape

Or go to the hydrogen room and cause an explosion too idk

There was another instant where my character has to jump from a high building on a moving truck that carried a substance that supposed would be water

After discussing it with ai I realized trucks don't usually let thier container open up let there is no substance that a person can fall on from a 4+ building and stay alive

So I had to create a fictional material, and I linked it to one of the main plot points of the story

Other thing is that there is a scene where there is an encounter with a police officer, so I brainstormed starting with running away to stright up killing the cop

I discussed with it things like how cops reaction speed, how he would normally react in these situations, if the cop shoot the character where is most likely to hit and many things

But the scenario itself was on me, I just kept altering it until the ai told me "this can happen"

There was also a scene where a characters big plan was to launch the unlaunched nuclear weapons on humanity, problem is the ai told Mr nuclear weapons can still be usable after 1000 without maintenance, so I changed the idea to other thing that had similar scale of destruction just not nuclear weapons

And here is the jewel on the crown

My character has supposedly get a mind control ability and when I presented this idea on the ai it told me it was so OP and the readers might question "why can't they just spam" and "this character can only loses when the plot demands it"

So after literally week of think I came up with the idea of making this ability only works on corpses and in very specific conditions and high risk and take a lot of prep time to do

Other than these scenes I just used AI to literally present my plot and glaze me to feed my ego hehe

So, did I taint my work with ai?

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u/Ender_Gamer7433 — 15 days ago