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My mother brought me these, and I can't wait to try them. I always love it when I get to try a new product. Fingerscrossed they are any good.

My mother brought me these, and I can't wait to try them. I always love it when I get to try a new product. Fingerscrossed they are any good.
I have this problem where I put way too much weight on details in my books. It probably makes for a cool reading experience, but it is really annoying the moment I try to patch a mistake. Anytime I change a line that I think won't matter, I suddenly find out it's referenced a few chapters later and causes a big plothole.
For example, a while ago I decided that the name of a god in my book should be revealed earlier. Originally I waited for the big moment to do so, but not in an epic-reveal way. It was more of an 'Oh, this being actually has a name' moment. Which is lazy writing, and I know better.
So as I was translating, I found a nice place to namedrop this god earlier. Easy fix, right?
Sike. One of the most epic lines in the book relies on my character not knowing this being's name. Now this time it isn't too big of a problem. I can probably fix it with rewording a few things and moving a few lines. However, it annoys me that this isn't an uncommon occurrence. It happens multiple times in every single book I write.
I'm not sure if I'm just causing this by overcomplicating things or if my plot holes and writing errors are just a huge fan of Hydra.
Please tell me if anyone else struggles with this. If not, send help. I've got to be stopped, or the next time I patch a mistake, the solution might just tear reality itself.
Description:
Naele has always ignored the will of the gods. Not by choice, but because no priest can decipher the life path marked on her skin. But they all agree on one thing: ignoring it means certain death. Naele is not planning on dying anytime soon though. She's far too busy for that. But as soldiers from a neighbouring country invade her small town, it's clear fate is catching up with her. Luckily Naele has a few more tricks up her sleeve.
This might be for you if you like:
-Dark fantasy
-Fascinating worldbuilding
-Dangerous gods
-High stakes
-Lots of shifting character dynamics with complicated motivations.
-A strong female lead that has no trouble lying, fighting and won't be suppressed.
Everything else you need to know:
-Ongoing, but with weekly updates.
-This book is for a mature audience only.
-You're awesome for reading this post.
Read my story here, or at my profile shadowstander.
Hello everyone, I struggle to commit to long stories at the moment, so I'm looking for some really short ones. Think 10k words or less.
Bonus points if it:
-is thriller, horror, fantasy or science fiction (but I'm fine with other things)
-has an interesting psychological conflict
-is underrated
I'm not in the mood for:
-Smut, excessive swearing and suicide/self-harm scenes.
-Romance as the main plot
-Uncompleted stories