I need FEEDBACK on my martial arts SHORT FILM!
Greetings all martial artists! I'm in need of some feedback and constructive criticisim!
My action short film Night of the Ronin was our first film shot with extensive martial arts chroreography and I'd love to know how we can improve. We had mma practioners on set to assist actors with proper technique but the style of fight and situiations are entirely fictionalisted and hyper reality.
Feedback on the film so far has been sparse, vague and generally about VFX, choreography and continuity errors. As welcome as all that is, I feel asthough feedback and attention to the martial arts has been lacking. It's one of the aspects of the film that I'm most curious to hear about from my peers and others outside my immediate social circle.
I ask everyone on this forum for their most honest and unbiased opinions and feedback about lighting, colour, composition and movement so that we may improve and become better action filmmakers.
thanks for you time.
- Nathan Bender