
Hello everyone!
Although I love creating characters and most of them are female (mainly because it is easier and more interesting for me to come up with concepts for female characters) I have very little practice with general anatomy. Also, I tried to get away from stereotypical female bodies and make her slightly thick (she's not obese, just chubby).
Except for her feet, which I know I need to improve A LOT, I think the rest of the body is pretty good in terms of proportions, but I would love a second opinion. I ask you to be critical, I really want to improve and any comments are welcome.
For those interested in the character, she is Vannie (I don't have a last name in mind yet), a mutant with vampire characteristics who fulfills a DPS role and is a frontline warrior. As a mutant, she has the following mutations:
* A great regenerative capacity, although this consumes a lot of energy and requires concentration, so she usually eats a lot. She can fully heals from big wounds and even recover amputated limbs, but its extremely hard to do that and probably take her a couple of days (unless she recover the limb and sews it into place, her body will reattach the tissue, although the union will be weak for a while).
* Several pairs of small bat wings along her body, specifically on her ears, wrists, ankles, lower back, and behind her neck. They are not useful for flying, but it increases her jump height and speed when running.
* She can digest raw flesh and blood
* Night vision, distinguishing figures clearly.
* Increased strength, being able to lift about 500kg with minimal effort. She also has greater speed, being able to reach about 60km/h in short races. Overexertion consumes energy and can leave her out of combat or on the edge of starvation.
* As disadvantages, direct and intense light disorients her, because her eyes are very sensitive. Similarly, her skin is damaged by excessive exposure to sunlight and intense sources cause 2nd and 3rd degree burns. she has a bad sense of taste, but an excellent one for fashion.
If you've read this far, I greatly appreciate your interest and will love to read your opinions. She may be a little broken, but it's the same for almost all the characters I have in mind, and if all of them are broken, none of them are overpowered, I think.
I'll try to post more about her soon, stay tuned ;).