
Hey everyone!
I've been thinking a lot lately about the conclusion to the Sequel Trilogy. As someone who actually grew up watching the ST, I have a massive soft spot for them. Even though I know they can be divisive, I truly believe the first two films set up a foundation that deserved a conclusion to wrap up the Skywalker Saga (from the PT to the OT to the ST) while serving characters like Finn, Poe, and Rose who were put on the back burner.
Right now, I'm piecing together a fan project called "Star Wars: The Codex Canon" that rewrites Star Wars material while blending together the best of Legends with the best of Canon. Included in this vision, I've been wondering how Episode IX would've looked if it had gone in Colin Trevorrow's direction. For the sake of this discussion, we are operating under the premise that Episode VII: "The Force Awakens" and Episode VIII: "The Last Jedi" remain exactly as they are (minus the hypothetical removal of a few cringeworthy moments such as overplayed Marvel humor, forced kisses, and minor inconsistencies) to let the real story shine!
Before getting into the alternate script, I do want to give credit where it's due: I enjoy many aspects of The Rise of Skywalker. The Goonies-style mystery in the first act is incredibly fun, C-3PO's larger (albeit, comedic) role was a blast, the visuals are absolutely gorgeous, and the score is fantastic.
However, for this project, I'm looking specifically at Colin Trevorrow's unproduced script, Episode IX: "Duel of the Fates." If you aren't familiar with it, here are some resources:
- Star Wars - Episode IX: Duel of the Fates (Script)
- Star Wars - Episode IX: Duel of the Fates (Comic Adaptation)
- Star Wars - Episode IX: Duel of the Fates (Comic Adaptation Movie)
- Star Wars: The Cancelled Episode IX We Never Got (Video)
I'm really curious to hear all of your opinions: if you were in the writer's room for Duel of the Fates, what changes (big or small) would you make to improve it and tie Star Wars together? I'm not talking about throwing the whole script away and writing a completely new Episode IX, but rather tweaking what's already there to make it the best possible finale.
P.S: Just a quick reminder that the DOTF script we're discussing (the only one that leaked) was an early draft, not a production-ready screenplay.
To kick things off, here are a few ideas I've been tossing around, and I'd love to hear your thoughts on them:
- The stormtroopers think of Finn (to them, FN-2187) as some kind of legend who stood up to Phasma and was brave enough to defect, along with having Finn and Poe discuss/resolve the fact that Poe killed Finn's friend, Slip, during the Jakku raid in The Force Awakens (the stormtrooper who smeared blood across Finn's helmet).
- To respectfully account for Carrie Fisher's tragic passing in late 2016, I feel Lucasfilm could have adapted this script - and the revisions to come - by shifting the bulk of Leia's active role to Lando (or rather, General Lando) to honor the OT. Leia's presence could be preserved for a beautifully inspiring speech broadcast to the entire galaxy (much like the original DOTF script), giving Carrie the massive moment she deserves.
- I like the idea where Hux collects lightsabers and Force-related artifacts ("Hux lost the Star Wars") and dies using Mace Windu's (?) purple lightsaber - but to make it work, I think the comedic elements (such as Hux trying to use the Force to spite Kylo and Rose laughing at Hux during interrogation) need to be removed. Playing his desperation and downfall entirely straight allows the stakes to feel much more serious (along with making Hux feel like the same character we met during The Force Awakens).
- Trevorrow's script utilizes Mortis as a location and major plot point, but since Mortis is a spiritual realm that appears to you rather than a place you can just fly a ship to, I thought about swapping it out. What if we used the Wellspring of Life/Planet of the Whills (where Yoda went during S6 of The Clone Wars) instead? It is far more accessible for a physical journey and could serve the same narrative purpose. Integrating minor ideas about the Whills could be a brilliant way to incorporate George Lucas's original ST concepts as well.
Enough about my ideas; I really want to hear some great opinions from this community! How would you fix the pacing, the character arcs, or the final battle in Duel of the Fates/Episode IX?
- Note: Let's keep the discussion constructive, civil and avoid any racism, homophobia, etc. Please respectfully bypass the "the saga ended at Return of the Jedi" takes as well; I'd love to keep the focus specifically on how to make this Episode IX the best it could be!
May the Force be with you! Always.