u/Different-Maize-2133

What do you guys think of my 4th Edit in Davinci? It's for the game TinyBookShop

I made a video in Davinci, it's the 4th short I created for my YouTube channel. It was for the game TinyBookShop. Can someone give me honest feedback on how the video is? What could I improve, and what is good so far?

Youtube Channel: Krissywoods, Shorts, TinyBookShop (latest short)

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u/Different-Maize-2133 — 23 hours ago