u/Diamond-Shappire

As the question states. And I would like some unbiased reviews, totally okay with being a fan but from a non-fan pov, is her writing good?

In my opinion, because I don't have 'favourite' authors, I'd say her writing is average. Some of her books are really well written, I enjoy the structure and plot, but some seem like a repeat and can become dreadful to get through. I've also noticed her writing style changes quite often.

I've seen people glaze her writing, which is fine but (in my opinion) it's not THAT good.

(This isn't hate, I swear, I just want to hear what others think about it because I don't see people mention it as often as they do with her repetitive plots, and the fact that she might use ghost writers)

As the question says (can also be phrased as, is raw writing better or the opposite?).

Also im not sure what the opposite writing style would be called. Almost like its filtered, uses fancy words, lots of details and explaining little things in depth. And raw would ofc almost be like you're inside of someone's head.

So which writing style is generally "better" or which do you prefer reading. I like both, I also write in both. So I would like some second opinions on how people view these/which they prefer.

A quick question for the novel I'm outlining. It's an MM and it's a royal romance. It's supposed to take place in older france but I have yet to decide that.

Basically, the crowned prince's love interest is talking (unwillingly) to another prince from another kingdom, basically being hit on, and prince A steps in because he's jealous. And his kingdom is of higher power/wealth, whatnot, so prince B get's a little scared. He apologies and leaves. but I'm confused on how to work the apology.

Would prince B, since he's also a crowned prince, refer to prince A by his name or would he call him you're highness or Prince (name), I'm a bit confused because they're of similar rank.