u/Crimson_Gamer2448

▲ 19 r/undergroundhiphop+2 crossposts

Is my cousin's verse THAT bad?

My cousin's verse is the second verse. One of my friends said this "Of course I can definitely tell tho that you do it more then your cousin. In a part of his verse it kinda like didnt go together or maybe the way he tried saying it. But every verse you had was smooth like butter". That was a copy and paste. My other friend told me verbally that he makes the song sound like a "joke", or a "parody" or something. I knew his verse was a little rough around the edges, but is it like, unpostable? He has the second verse. PS. I know there's artifacts in the chorus and you can hear the hi-hats leak through our headphones into the vocals, I'm already gonna re-record that. Any other critiques would be appreciated though!

u/Crimson_Gamer2448 — 2 days ago