u/CriesOfeternity

Hey everyone! Long time lurker looking for some outside ears on my playing.

This is a recording of the first movement of the Brahms second sonata. Overall, I like some qualities of my sound and color, but I feel my phrasing is sometimes aimless and tone at times bright / inconsistent. Can anyone give advice on what they hear needs improvement? It’s hard for me to be objective about my own playing, so I’d love to hear from other players!