▲ 5 r/coldemail
The #1 mistake: Starting with "I"
"I am reaching out because..."
"I wanted to introduce..."
"I help businesses..."
Nobody cares about YOU yet.
Start with THEM:
"I noticed your landing page loads
in 4 seconds — you're probably
losing 30% of conversions"
That's it. Make it about them.
What's the best opening line
you've ever written?
u/ClientforgeAI — 13 days ago