u/Chiz-rag-420

Please critique my essay. You guys seem to have a culture I'm ignorant to so sorry if this is bad manners or something or if short fictional stories are all that's allowed. I did critique something else before posting this. It was the "the fall" by "AC-shock" his isn't as long as mine but the 1:1 ratio seems a little arbitrary to me because writing is so subjective I was through and thoughtful though. If you want to delete the post then whatevs.

This is an essay about human perception.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13rD5Y5aRXXnf8Z8lkG1u9wqE_Y1cbAmDw3VeumdrGF0/edit?usp=drivesdk