I don’t quite understand what it means but would like this to feel stronger. The rainbow should be more pronounced. The bottom right corner is the hardest part to solve. Any constructive criticism? What am I blind to?
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This is acrylic and colored pencil on a textured illustration paper. In terms of desired improvements, composition and focal point are my weak spots. I struggle to keep consistent stylistic rules in more abstract images. I would like to know what other blind spots I have with this image that are weakening the image. With the edits and recommendations suggested in the comments, I’ll do a second draft. There are no references with this and I’m okay with the subject matter itself being confusing- but would like for the image to be stylistically comprehensive and completed-feeling rather than scattered and muddy and busy.