u/Careful_Opening_3801

You are the bright sun in the sky,
even though the clouds were shrouding the earth yesterday,
you still showed up today, 
casting away the shadows of those who surround you.

You are a mighty mountain,
standing strong for all to see,
even after enduring years of hardship,
you truly are an amazing person.

You are proof that strength is not loud but enduring, 
the resilience you carry is nothing but inspiring,
it’s one of many of my favorite things about you,
that you can endure so much and still be the loving person you are

You are proof that your past does not define who you are,
that anyone can endure and overcome harshness,
and though you make mistakes,
that just confirms that you are human, filled with compassion, ever so loving and kind

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u/Careful_Opening_3801 — 7 days ago
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Wanting feedback on a poem I wrote for someone. I want to know if I should change anything or if I should expand (and how).

You are the bright sun in the sky,
even though the clouds were shrouding the earth yesterday,
you still showed up today, 
casting away the shadows of those who surround you.

You are a mighty mountain,
standing strong for all to see,
even after enduring years of hardship,
you truly are an amazing person.

You are proof that strength is not loud but enduring, 
the resilience you carry is nothing but inspiring,
it’s one of many of my favorite things about you,
that you can endure so much and still be the loving person you are

You are proof that your past does not define who you are,
that anyone can endure and overcome harshness,
and though you make mistakes,
that just confirms that you are human, filled with compassion, ever so loving and kind

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u/Careful_Opening_3801 — 7 days ago