u/Boring_Variation_426 — reddlx

You strip off your skin for me

I begged you not to, but the words never breach your determination

I can hypothesize your ramblings,

The words sour high, the meaning sours my mind

So much adoration falls from your lips,

I choose to pluck out my teeth, because if I didn't-

I'd mandate autopsy alone, while crowds scrutinize the funeral

You strip off your skin for me

I begged you not to, but the words never reach open air

I can hypothesize your ramblings,

The words sour high, the meaning sours my mind

So much adoration falls from your lips,

I choose to pluck out my teeth, because if I didn't-

I'd mandate autopsy alone, while crowds scrutinize the funeral

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If you want you can just read, but feedback would be cool XD

The last day I saw my best friend she was stuck-

stuck in a bed while I berated her.

I recall how I dragged my unwilling feet as I cleaned her mess.

Yet where is she now?

As I organize her suffocating clutter I look back at her bed.

I wish I could take back all I said.

Maybe then I'd have the time to proudly present her the portrait she once begged me for.

Now it hangs over my desk so I can remember her eye color.

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Hey! I'm new to poetry, this is one of my first poems actually. So please be nice in your critiques, I'll still take them but don't insult. ^u^