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Hey everyone,

I wrote a fast-paced action-comedy script called Target Rich.

It follows a stylish hitman who treats missions like a game — mixing intense action with humor, music, and chaos.

Think: John Wick meets Kingsman, but less serious and more unpredictable.

I’m looking for honest feedback (not just “it’s good” — real notes that can help me improve).

If you’re interested, comment and I’ll send it over.

Appreciate it 🙏